Re: Specific link (web site text aspects) Message #29 Posted by Andrés C. Rodríguez (Argentina) on 2 Sept 2011, 7:54 a.m., in response to message #20 by Brian Walsh
In the Product Description on the web site, the "own a classic" sentence is (almost) duplicated.
Own a classic: each calculator is stamped with a unique limited-edition production number.
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Own a classic: each limited-edition model of this cool calculator is stamped with its own production number
The first line is the best one, in my opinion.
Also, the reference to "complex calculations" may be more specific; it's not a "complexity" issue, but the ability to work with "complex numbers".
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