Re: Sharing a Story Message #13 Posted by hpnut on 2 Aug 2008, 1:20 p.m., in response to message #1 by Ray Tabler
Hi Ray,
I enjoyed your writing. there were three incorrect use of English and spelling mistakes:
1. damn drink - should be damned drink
2. LCD shinning dark and sultry - shining?
3. florescent lights - surely fluorescent?
btw, I am not a native speaker of English.
keep the stories rolling, buddy :-)
hpnut in Malaysia
Edited: 2 Aug 2008, 1:20 p.m.
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